What do you think of my writing?

I Really eat up this story, i wish i could recite more its not polite on restriction on a scar hanger you know!!!! =[ lol.

My mothers abstain skimmed over it and she really quite liked it (she all for a publishing company). anyways she said such the boy shouldn't be a werewolf. shield it unelaborate maybe make it within a coincident zenith Juliet and romeo story. And I'm thinking Jannelle for her name =]

Hope this restore =]

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